Literally translating your French cover letter into English is the most common - and most visible - mistake in front of an Anglo-Saxon recruiter. An English cover letter follows different, more direct codes, detailed below.
Cover letter vs. the French lettre de motivation
The French lettre de motivation often favors a more formal opening and a certain restraint in self-assessment. The Anglo-Saxon cover letter works the other way: it expects a direct demonstration of your value, from the very first lines, without excessive courtesy detours.
Key differences:
| Element | French letter | English cover letter | |---|---|---| | Tone | Formal, reserved | Direct, results-oriented | | Length | Can exceed one page | Always one page, never more | | Opening | Classic salutation formula | Hook with an achievement or notable fact | | Self-assessment | Modesty valued | Confidence expected | | Closing | Elaborate courtesy formula | "Sincerely" or "Best regards," sober |
The official Prospects.ac.uk guide on writing a cover letter 🔗 - a reference from British university career services - recalls a central principle: the cover letter complements the resume, it never duplicates it.
💡 Learn more: if you're also applying to international positions in French, check our guide to adapting your resume for international positions.
Expected structure in English
The Block Letter format
The Block Letter format, standard in Anglo-Saxon countries, requires left alignment throughout the document, no paragraph indentation, with a standard font (Arial, Calibri or Times New Roman, size 10 to 12).
The four-paragraph plan
- Opening paragraph: why you're writing, for which position, with a hook tied to an achievement or notable fact from your background
- Body paragraph 1: your relevant professional experience, with quantified results
- Body paragraph 2: your key skills directly related to the offer, reusing the job posting's vocabulary where possible
- Closing paragraph: why this company specifically, and a call to action ("I would welcome the opportunity to discuss...")
You can generate a first standardized version with the European tool Europass Cover Letter 🔗, useful for setting the structure before fully personalizing the content.
Key vocabulary and phrases
Opening phrases:
- "I am writing to apply for the position of..."
- "With great interest, I am applying for..."
To highlight a result:
- "I successfully delivered / achieved / increased..."
- "My role involved..." (avoid using alone - always follow with a result)
To close:
- "I would welcome the opportunity to discuss how my background aligns with your needs."
- "Sincerely," or "Best regards," (never a literal translation of "Cordialement" into "Cordially," too rare in professional English)
📊 Go further on your English resume: our guide on the bilingual French-English resume in finance details the same cultural translation exercise applied to the resume.
Full example
Dear Hiring Manager,
I am writing to apply for the Financial Analyst position at [Company], as advertised on [source]. During my internship at [Previous Company], I built and maintained a DCF valuation model for a portfolio of 12 companies, directly supporting a €50M investment recommendation.
My academic background in corporate finance, combined with hands-on experience in financial modeling and Excel automation, has prepared me to contribute immediately to your team. I reduced monthly reporting time by 30% through process automation - a result I am eager to replicate in a fast-paced international environment such as yours.
What draws me to [Company] specifically is [concrete reason: a deal, a market position, a values statement from their site]. I am confident my analytical rigor and adaptability would make me a strong addition to your team.
I would welcome the opportunity to discuss my application further at your convenience.
Sincerely, [Full Name]
This example works because each paragraph brings concrete proof (a number, a result, a precise reason) rather than a generic statement of intent.
Mistakes to avoid
- Literally translating a French letter: French courtesy phrasing ("j'ai l'honneur de vous soumettre ma candidature") sounds artificial in English
- Exceeding one page: beyond that, the recruiter won't read it to the end
- Staying modest: a cover letter that claims no concrete result reads as flat next to Anglo-Saxon candidates used to direct self-promotion
- Using overly formal or dated English: prefer a clear, professional style over pompous vocabulary
- Forgetting to adapt tone to the target country: the UK stays more formal, the US accepts a more direct, sales-oriented tone
⚠️ Warning: a cover letter full of phrasing translated from French is one of the fastest signals spotted by an English-speaking recruiter - and one of the easiest to fix with a careful re-read.
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