Before reading your resume, a recruiter reads your email subject line. It decides whether the message is opened, forwarded or ignored. Here is how to write an effective subject, structure the body and adapt your message to each situation, with examples ready to personalise.
Writing an effective subject line
The subject must let the recruiter sort the email without opening it. A finance recruiter receives dozens of applications a day: if they cannot tell immediately what it is about, they move on.
Four rules:
- Say what you are asking for: job, internship, apprenticeship, meeting.
- Include the reference of the posting if there is one.
- Keep it short: about fifteen words at most, or it gets cut off on mobile.
- Skip the fluff: no exclamation marks, no "Urgent", and not just "Application", which is too vague.
Formulas that work:
Application – M&A Analyst – Ref. 2026-0412Final-year internship in financial audit – [First Last]Apprenticeship in management control, September 2027 – [First Last]Unsolicited application – Credit Analyst – [School] Master's
Structure of the email body
A good application email fits in five to eight lines. It does not repeat your resume: it makes the reader want to open it.
- A personalised greeting: "Dear Ms Martin", not "Dear Sir or Madam" when you know the name.
- A one-sentence hook: who you are and what you are looking for (degree, target role, availability).
- A proof paragraph: one or two quantified achievements matching the role's needs.
- A "why them" sentence: what draws you to this team or company, specifically.
- A call to action: offer a phone call or meeting.
- A full signature: name, phone, LinkedIn link.
💡 Learn more: to get a conversation before even applying, read our guide to networking in finance.
Examples by situation
Answering a job posting
Subject: Application – M&A Analyst – Ref. 2026-0412
Dear Ms Martin,
As a graduate of a Master's in Corporate Finance, I am applying for the M&A analyst position posted on your website. During my internship at [Company], I built the valuation models for four mid-cap deals, one of which ended in a sale.
Your team is known for industrial deals, a sector I studied for my thesis. I would be glad to speak with you this week or next.
Kind regards, [First Last] – 06 00 00 00 00 – linkedin.com/in/…
Unsolicited application
Subject: Unsolicited application – Credit Analyst – [School] Master's
Dear Mr Dubois,
As a Master's student in Banking and Finance, I am looking for a credit analyst position starting in September. Your corporate financing team interests me in particular for its work on regional SMEs.
My resume is attached. Would you have fifteen minutes for a phone call?
Kind regards, [First Last]
After a networking conversation
Subject: Following our conversation on the 12th – Financial audit internship
Dear Ms Leroy,
Thank you for your time yesterday. As agreed, I am sending my resume for the January audit internship. Your advice on preparing for case studies was very helpful.
I remain available for any further information.
Kind regards, [First Last]
After a forum or fair
Subject: Following the [Name] forum – Management control apprenticeship application
Dear Mr Petit,
We spoke at your booth on 14 October about the management control apprenticeship. I attach my resume and remain available for an interview.
Kind regards, [First Last]
Follow-up
Subject: Follow-up – M&A Analyst application – Ref. 2026-0412
Dear Ms Martin,
I am following up on my application sent on 3 November. It remains relevant and I would be delighted to present my motivation in a conversation.
Kind regards, [First Last]
Generally wait one to two weeks before following up, and follow up only once.
Attachments
- A PDF resume, clearly named:
CV_FirstName_LastName.pdf. A name likeCV_final_v3.pdflooks disorganised. - A cover letter only if requested. Otherwise the email body is enough and saves the reader time.
- A reasonable size: under 2 MB, to avoid mail filters.
- A text PDF, not an image: screening software (ATS) cannot read a resume exported as a screenshot.
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Mistakes to avoid
- An empty subject ("Application") or one without your name: impossible to find in a full inbox.
- A generic greeting ("Dear Sir or Madam") when the recruiter's name is findable on LinkedIn.
- A too-long email: beyond one screen, it is not read.
- Spelling mistakes: in finance, rigour is also judged by proofreading.
- An unprofessional address: prefer
first.last@…. - A visible copy-paste: another company's name in the body ruins the application.
- Forgetting to personalise: recruiters immediately spot the message sent to fifty banks.
🎯 Before the next step: if your application is shortlisted, prepare your investment banking interview.
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